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I’m Beautiful
Once upon a time , there was an angel kingdom in the
heaven , named Ciarra. All the angels lived peacefully with their own magical
power. One of them was Damara, a beautiful young angel of twenty. She was the
king’s beloved daughter who has long
brown hair with a magical lightening circle above her hair. It would be
darkened if she was sad.
However , she
had less confidence than her two sisters. She liked to take a long time looking
herself in the magical mirror which could change one’s appereance to be more
attractive whenever they saw theirselves at it. But , it actually didn’t happen
with their real appereance. It was just such kind of illusion given by the
magical mirror. Therefore, Damara would
be upset after she realized that herself was not what she was expected. She
felt that she as a rotten apple between her two sisters. She aimed herself that
she was not as beautiful as them. She had tried hard to beautify her appearance
by treating herself with charm. But, her vinture was in vain, she couldn’t
change nything of her body because destiny couldn’t be change with magical
power.
One day
she flight over the heaven to amuse herself by enjoying the wonderful view
above the sky. Then she stopped at the mountainous cloud and decided to take a
rest for a while. Damara was lying on the cloud with the circle kept darkening on
and on. While enjoying her daydreaming, She
heard that another angels were talking shop. One of them broke the news
.
“Look at
me , I’m now pretty , aren’t I ?” said one of the woman.
“Oh my
God , are you Sheila ? you look so different , I mean , you are amazing . how
could it be?” another woman implied.
“Mum’s
the word, I came to a witch who lived in the dark cloud.” Said the woman.
Hearing
that, Damara directly followed the blabber’s words. She looked for the dark
cloud the woman had mentioned. When she arrived there , An ugly old lady with crooked body and white tangled hair that
was very misterious greeted Damara.
“Excuse
me , Madam. Is it the house of a witch
living in the dark cloud ?” asked Damara.
“Yes dear
, what do you want from me ?”
“I want
you to turn myself into the most charming angel in this heaven , I will give
you thousands stars , my father is the king of this kingdom. You can live in
the castle ,and I’ll give whatever you want.”
The witch
gave her a sarcatic smile on her face. “It’s hard to be through dear.”
“Help me
please , I don’t care whatever the risks.” She begged.
“OK ,I’ll
turn you to be the most charming angel like you want with my black magic, but
you musn’t be arrogant upon other angel . If you broke it , you’ll be the
ugliest angel in this heaven.”
“OK , I
promise Madam.”
“
Cliiiing.....” with the witch’s dark
magic, Damara became the most beautiful angel at That time.
When
Damara came back to the castle, all of the angels were so surprised. They amazed with the beauty of Damara “. Damara,
what happened to you ? you look so different. You’re not like a plain angel--Damara
that I know”. “It’s me ofcourse, the most attractive and charming angel in this
heaven. None can be as beautiful as me.“ She suddenly felt something strange inside herself. Her
face was so hot and she felt painful in all her body. Her beautiful wings was
shattered, and her face was full of scared. Damara suddenly yelled loudly.
“what happen with my face ! ”.
Damara
realized that she had botched up her promise to the witch. She went to the
witch’s house and told her what was happened to her. “ I had told you, Damara.
“ The witch said. “Help me healing all this pain ! “ Damara cried. “ Can you
see me, huh? Could you think why I’m so ugly? I’ve experienced what you have
now. I also want to change my self to be more and more beautiful in the last
time. But I couldn’t keep my promise. My face turned to be ugly and old “. “ I
do regret to be ungrateful angel,please tell me how I can relieve from this
suffer. I beg you so “ Damara asked with heart and soul. “hear, Damara.. go
down to the earth, and look for the man who can love you sincerely with your
own condition right now. Your self will turn to be what you are before the
black charm. “ I will do it,madam “ said Damara.
The
following day, damara went down to the earth and disguised as a human with her
shattered face. Everybody mocked her
when they saw Damara’s face. But She never gave up until she met that boy. The
next day, When Damara took a walk on the road, she met someone whose face full
of pimples, he wore dirty clothes and smelled so stinky. Damara could feel the
boy’s suffering. They got know each other, shared many stories of their life.
“Don’t be upset, don’t be shy to be like this. Hmm... look at me. I’m happy to
be myself. Although I’m not goodlooking, I can smile widely.” Damara said to
the boy. Then damara was surprised of the boy’s words. “ Damara, I felt in love
with you after I know that you’re good hearted person. You didn’t mock or even
get rid of me although I’m ugly. I see that you’re tthe girl that I’m looking
for. Will you marry me ? said the boy. Suddenly She turned into her original
appearance and so did the boy. His appearance was changed to be a handsome
angel. The boy was actually the cursed angel.” I don’t believe that you are an
angel disguising as a human like me, Ofcourse I say yes. I’ll be loving you for
the rest of my life, being your beloved wife in the heaven and live harmonously
with you” Damara answered. Then they lived together happily ever after.
Generic structure :
1. Orientation
2. Evaluation
3. Complication
4. Resolution
